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donderdag 22 september 2011

Sarahs Email

Hi Sarah!

I miss you so much, here in Bristol its a little cold now because the winter is coming.
Here we going to build a new school i thinks its great! it is going to be much bigger than before.
All in the gang is missing you and your laugh, when you is gone theres not so noise and funny.
Sometime i must go and visit you in London and check at your school.
And see your new home and Piccadilly Circus.
We can go on amusement just we two in the summer it had been really funny, like in your birthday.
ill hope you have funny in you new home.

2 opmerkingen:

  1. It was a great good mail!! Funny that Sarah and Jan perhaps should go on a amusement!!! ;)

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  2. A nice letter! Good word knowledge but check the forms!
    correct:
    ...it's....
    ...Everybody inte the gang i s missing.... OR... All members of the gang....
    Here we're ( we are) going to ....
    . I think.... (Alltid stor bokstav på "i" + inget +s här!)
    ...when you are gone it's not so noisy and funny.
    We can go to an amusement park....It would be really funny , perhaps when you have your birthday. I hope you are enjoying your new home.

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