When i should go at a date whit my girlfriend at Mc´Donald's i let my twin brother instead.
In there it´s smell like smoke and Ice-cream, The chair was old, and unstable and it smell very bad. Then my date come i´ll got nerves she had very tall blond hair and jeans whit a top. Then i order a hamburger and an soda and she got an ice-cream then when i should take my first bite of the burger she understood that it was not her boyfriend because i got an scar at my cheek so she got very angry at me and she screamed that she never wanna se me again! Then she ruined out from Mc´donald´s crying. When i told it to Ben my brother he got mad at me because Ben liked the girl.
Bye!
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